Wednesday 22 October 2014

'Chasm' - Crisis Short Story

A short story based upon a crisis. Nothing special, let me know what you think guys!

After he lent on it, the cracks began to emerge, at first just allowing a handful of pebbles to break loose. But as he walked away deeper into the chasm the cracks began to emerge. Getting deeper and the rock began to creak as the opening began to get wider. He was still oblivious as to what was going to happen within a few moments. Unlike with a bullet, he would hear the crack of the rock that would kill him.
He bound down the valley, where he was going not even he knew. This was his year out, a time for adventure so he decided to discover the vast caves of Western America. This was the the fourth chasm he had delved into, he felt free there. The heat began to beat down, it was less imposing within the hole he found himself in, yet within moments the sun would become a distant memory and certainly the least of his troubles. The cracks began to emerge and the creaking seeped into his ears, he turned. This was the first sound he had heard for two hours and the sound of creaking rock was surely not a positive one. He turned back into the valley, had he gone to inspect then he would have been safe but he stepped further towards the cave mouth. An area the size of the rock he had just, without him knowing, set free.

It began to tumble. He heard it now, It broke free and began to bounce slowly towards him, by this time he had realised that the cave he was walking towards was non existent, and he found himself at a dead end, in all senses of the phrase. He began a frenzy searching for any way to escape his imminent death, he looked up to the sun with a look of despair etched onto his face. A face of a life that was about to end. A ledge was within reach he leaped to reach it and brushed it with his fingers. Hurling himself towards freedom his fingers gripped the edge of the rock shelf. He wasn't strong but his fear added weight to his muscle, allowing him to cling to the ledge with his feet dangling in the path of the rock. A tear fell.

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